Oh, you're good. All your characters are utterly pitch-perfect, and this story is just *lovely*.
Also, I am stealing this: "Regular people, if they hold a cup full of coffee, they get a little indentation on their finger where the handle presses against it. Metas and people like Wonder Woman or Power Girl don't."
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Date: 2006-07-02 03:13 pm (UTC)Also, I am stealing this: "Regular people, if they hold a cup full of coffee, they get a little indentation on their finger where the handle presses against it. Metas and people like Wonder Woman or Power Girl don't."