Yay, you posted it! Just because it was for me doesn't mean others shouldn't share the wealth. Especially when it's Bruce/Terry, which you write like nobody's business.
I was kind of surprised you changed Mai's name to May, given the strong Asian influence on the culture of future!Gotham. I continue to love that garden, though, and how Bruce had no hand in its design except for how he totally did.
For the edification of others reading now, our conversation after the end of the story:
Jamjar (6:25:08): Terry looks at his back as he leaves. Two more hours of the party. Probably three. Jamjar (6:25:14): the end Jamjar (6:25:19): because I as mean as Bruce Jack (6:25:25): oh noooes! poor terry. his balls will go past blue to black and drop off. Jamjar (6:25:25): though not as scary Jack (6:27:01): eeheehee Jack (6:27:21): well, at least terry has the nice tingle in his mouth to get him through. Jamjar (6:27:41): yeah Jack (6:27:50): and when they DO get home, or possibly just to the limo, bruce is gonna make him come SO HARD Jamjar (6:27:56): Yes Jack (6:28:14): really, not all bad. not AT ALL bad. Jamjar (6:28:17): although by that point, Terry will need very little help Jack (6:28:23): true. Jack (6:28:32): just unfastening his pants may do it. Jamjar (6:28:33): possibly if Bruce just, you know *exists* at him Jack (6:28:37): AHAHAHAHA Jack (6:28:43): yes, or THAT Jamjar (6:29:05): looking, talking, touching... Jack (6:29:06): the door closes, the limo glides smoothly into motion, and bruce LOOKS at terry. Jamjar (6:29:14): might be a bit excessive, almost Jamjar (6:29:24): terry "..." Jamjar (6:29:33): then "Fuck!" Jack (6:29:38): but because bruce is not a COMPLETE bastard, he'll probably make terry come again, later. Jack (6:29:41): after patrol. Jamjar (6:29:46): "I had thought, but since you're already done..." Jack (6:29:56): AHAHAHAHAHA Jamjar (6:30:07): pity Gotham's criminals tonight! Jack (6:31:37): jokerz, rubbing at their injuries, as the cops take them in: 'hey, did batman seem, like, extra angry tonight?' 'yeah. like, frustrated.' Jack (6:31:59): so are you going to clean that up and post it? Jamjar (6:32:16): maybe Jack (6:32:42): because there is not enough bruce/terry porn in the world by half, and others should get to see it too.
Now you just need to post that OTHER Bruce/Terry story of yours. YOU KNOW THE ONE I MEAN.
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Date: 2004-12-07 12:15 pm (UTC)I was kind of surprised you changed Mai's name to May, given the strong Asian influence on the culture of future!Gotham. I continue to love that garden, though, and how Bruce had no hand in its design except for how he totally did.
For the edification of others reading now, our conversation after the end of the story:
Jamjar (6:25:08): Terry looks at his back as he leaves. Two more hours of the party. Probably three.
Jamjar (6:25:14): the end
Jamjar (6:25:19): because I as mean as Bruce
Jack (6:25:25): oh noooes! poor terry. his balls will go past blue to black and drop off.
Jamjar (6:25:25): though not as scary
Jack (6:27:01): eeheehee
Jack (6:27:21): well, at least terry has the nice tingle in his mouth to get him through.
Jamjar (6:27:41): yeah
Jack (6:27:50): and when they DO get home, or possibly just to the limo, bruce is gonna make him come SO HARD
Jamjar (6:27:56): Yes
Jack (6:28:14): really, not all bad. not AT ALL bad.
Jamjar (6:28:17): although by that point, Terry will need very little help
Jack (6:28:23): true.
Jack (6:28:32): just unfastening his pants may do it.
Jamjar (6:28:33): possibly if Bruce just, you know *exists* at him
Jack (6:28:37): AHAHAHAHA
Jack (6:28:43): yes, or THAT
Jamjar (6:29:05): looking, talking, touching...
Jack (6:29:06): the door closes, the limo glides smoothly into motion, and bruce LOOKS at terry.
Jamjar (6:29:14): might be a bit excessive, almost
Jamjar (6:29:24): terry "..."
Jamjar (6:29:33): then "Fuck!"
Jack (6:29:38): but because bruce is not a COMPLETE bastard, he'll probably make terry come again, later.
Jack (6:29:41): after patrol.
Jamjar (6:29:46): "I had thought, but since you're already done..."
Jack (6:29:56): AHAHAHAHAHA
Jamjar (6:30:07): pity Gotham's criminals tonight!
Jack (6:31:37): jokerz, rubbing at their injuries, as the cops take them in:
'hey, did batman seem, like, extra angry tonight?'
'yeah. like, frustrated.'
Jack (6:31:59): so are you going to clean that up and post it?
Jamjar (6:32:16): maybe
Jack (6:32:42): because there is not enough bruce/terry porn in the world by half, and others should get to see it too.
Now you just need to post that OTHER Bruce/Terry story of yours. YOU KNOW THE ONE I MEAN.