ext_1543 ([identity profile] chalcopyrite.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jamjar 2005-05-16 07:03 pm (UTC)

I like Kon's uncertainty of where he stands in this, and the little touches that he's weirded out -- "he'd hardly even *spoken* to Nightwing before today." He's more observant than he's often given credit for, and I like how you have him noticing things -- not dwelling on them, but noticing, and knowing what they meant. Especially both the Birdboys using him to touch each other. And he's not surprised that Tim's hands go to find particular scars on Nightwing's back. Phew! ::fans self:: ::goes back to re-read:: Nnhhh!

Very yummy. And the title works for me, playing off the range-finding they're all doing and the shifting distances.

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